I remember we planned to visit Yunnan in July but now bucause my left foot was injured, I cannot go with you as planned.
I’m sorry about it. Can I suggest that we put it off until early august? I wish you could understand. I’m looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours,
Joe
第二节
内容要点
1. 点明问题;
2. 讨论问题;
3. 提交建议;
4. 看到变化。
One possible version
There was a problem with the parking place for bikes in our school, I noticed the entrance was small and almost blocked. So my classmates and I had a discussion and wrote a report. Then we went to meet the schoolmaster in his office and gave the report to him. He accepted our suggfestions. Soon afterwards, a second entrance was opened to the parking place. Now it is easy to park our bikes there.